story finished: not really, 10%.
who's interested?: I think nobody
Easy?: no, but in my dreams goes it very easy.
inspiration: yeah
Story:
fay's parents are climate- and nature scientists.
they says that fay a punk,fay don't care.
at day Is fay an schoolgirl, at night is she an criminal
on an meeting of the climate- and nature science, that the world has more rapidly fared to then they expected had.
Fay and Aaron are save the world on them own.
characters:
Fay (real name Fayza, 16)
a changeable girl, most quiet and an "dont care" girl..
her parents are strict and never listen to her.
they only care about straight A's.
she thinks that her life is boring, goes she with her friend aaron
the criminal world in.
Aaron (18)
bad-tempered and loveble boy
An big friend of Fay
He helps her With everything, cause he likes her.
Sharon (16)
a cousin of aaron
an normal friend of Fay
tidy, girly, good, informer and tries to be funny.
The girl that makes trouble of aarons life.
Fay's parents (mother 36 father 40)
both climate- and nature science.
they take fay always to meetings,
copperhead (30)
the criminal employer of fay and aaron.
(It can be updaded)
Beta poster [link]
Who's can made it better? :3
INPORTANT!
if you see that my grammar wrong, say it please
oh and leave a comment If you like this.
Thaaanks :3
P.s
if you know what english surnames, can you give some? ( or give your own one LAWL)
pps
questions? Please ASK!
:3
Devious Comments
En voor engels of alles juist is ga ik niet antwoorden want bij mij is het wws verkeerd. ik en engels...
En waarom g
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I'm Mila in deviantART's official Skyland Crew
not 1010 .. Jeeez
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You can check out this site for common English surnames: [link]
Also, when you were talking about the poster, were you asking if someone could help you make a better one or make that one better? I'd be willing to help you if that's the case.
Anyway, good luck with your story, sounds really interesting.
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