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1010 Isn't coming

Mon Jan 26, 2009, 11:13 AM
story gerne: romance/drama, geuss I.
story finished: not really, 10%.
who's interested?: I think nobody
Easy?: no, but in my dreams goes it very easy.
inspiration: yeah

Story:
fay's parents are climate- and nature scientists.
they says that fay a punk,fay don't care.
at day Is fay an schoolgirl, at night is she an criminal
on an meeting of the climate- and nature science, that the world has more rapidly fared to then they expected had.
Fay and Aaron are save the world on them own.


characters:

Fay (real name Fayza, 16)
a changeable girl, most quiet and an "dont care" girl..
her parents are strict and never listen to her.
they only care about straight A's.
she thinks that her life is boring, goes she with her friend aaron
the criminal world in.

Aaron (18)
bad-tempered and loveble boy
An big friend of Fay
He helps her With everything, cause he likes her.

Sharon (16)
a cousin of aaron
an normal friend of Fay
tidy, girly, good, informer and tries to be funny.
The girl that makes trouble of aarons life.

Fay's parents (mother 36 father 40)
both climate- and nature science.
they take fay always to meetings,

copperhead (30)
the criminal employer of fay and aaron.


(It can be updaded)

Beta poster [link]
Who's can made it better? :3

INPORTANT!
if you see that my grammar wrong, say it please

oh and leave a comment If you like this.


Thaaanks :3

P.s
if you know what english surnames, can you give some? ( or give your own one LAWL)

pps
questions? Please ASK!

:3

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:iconkillerwolfje:
Toch vind ik het jammer dat het niet komt want het leek een goed verhaal ma ya ^^;

En voor engels of alles juist is ga ik niet antwoorden want bij mij is het wws verkeerd. ik en engels... :D

En waarom g

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:iconkillerwolfje:
Ow en waarom ga je het er niet opzetten ^^''?

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FACK THE TITLE IS 2010 ISNT COMING
not 1010 .. Jeeez

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:iconcharlietheunicorn13:
This looks interesting! Even if you do have some grammatical errors (which is totally understandable, considering English isn't your best language) I can still understand the plot and the characters for the most part, and I like what I see so far. :)

You can check out this site for common English surnames: [link]

Also, when you were talking about the poster, were you asking if someone could help you make a better one or make that one better? I'd be willing to help you if that's the case.

Anyway, good luck with your story, sounds really interesting. :)

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